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At midnight, my son got a high fever and couldn't sleep, so I took him to the hospital and saw a doctor.
Eventually, my son has been hospitalized.
He has still a high fever, but he doesn't look bad.
He eats a lot of meals and drinks a lot of water, tea, and juice.
I'm relieved.
I hope he leaves the hospital early.
Are you OK these days?
Take care, please.
Are these sentences natural and grammatically correct?
At midnight, my son got a high fever and couldn't sleep, so I took him to the hospital and saw a doctor.
Eventually, my son has been hospitalized.
He has still a high fever, but he doesn't look bad.
He eats a lot of meals and drinks a lot of water, tea, and juice.
I'm relieved.
I hope he leaves the hospital early.
Are you OK these days?
Take care, please.
Are these sentences natural and grammatically correct?
Eventually, my son has been hospitalized.
He has still a high fever, but he doesn't look bad.
He eats a lot of meals and drinks a lot of water, tea, and juice.
I'm relieved.
I hope he leaves the hospital early.
Are you OK these days?
Take care, please.
Are these sentences natural and grammatically correct?
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- English (US)
You did a good job! This sounds a bit more natural
At midnight, my son got a high fever and couldn't sleep, so I took him to the hospital to see a doctor.
Eventually, my son was hospitalized.
He still has a high fever, but he doesn't look bad.
He eats a lot of meals and drinks a lot of water, tea, and juice.
I'm relieved.
I hope he leaves the hospital early.
Are you OK these days?
Take care, please.
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